I was disappointed that you left us hanging. Wish there had been some romance
very good much angst *sniff* poor lizzie & poor john
I love how you write sparky!
Oh, cliffie - you evil, evil person.
Loved this chapter anyway :-)
My favorite line: "You're lucky we didn't keel over from hunger". Cracking up!
Awww: "That's my job. To take care of her when she's off-world." John affirmed.
*sniff*
That was a really nice chapter. I loved the talk between John and Rodney - as always hilarious! Cannot wait to read more!
Good story leading up to Letters. Thanks for another entertaining story... but are you going to finish "Letters"? You left off a bit and I would love to see where that goes.
Thanks again for a good story, always enjoy your writing.
Nice chappy. I love Rodney's reaction :)
Great story. Plz update soon!
The last part of the chapter was beautiful beyond words! Loved it!
More so because I just watched "Before I sleep" last night. Thanks for posting!
My favorite line: - "I need to brush up on my stealth skills," he muttered - 'cause that cracked me up!
OMG - I so want to see that on TV.
Anyone write a letter, please!
Cutest part: "John reached out and started unlacing Elizabeth's shoes." My mind was in the gutter after that... ;-) Kidding... that was really cute!
In case it didn't come across - I cannot wait to read more!
Awww... "They take you away over my dead body." ... so cute.
Just like the first chapter - wonderfully written, perfectly build. I'm in love with this story!
BTW, this "Sure... I guess someone should tell Conan and Xena." cracked me up. :-) That's so Rodney!
God - that was beyond beautiful!
I almost started to cry at: "She was terrified to think of a future without her." - because I may not be terrified but very sad!
I thank you for this chapter, this story. You made me sign up at last... so I could write this...
Cant believe they r sending her back this cant b happening. I need 2 no more plz update soon!!!
*tear*
Aww...lostgrace this one made me cry--- the way he promised her that nothing would happen to her, that no one would take her away
*cries*
Poor, poor Lizzie.
*sniff*
Can't wait till you update this- but when are you going to update letters?
*squee!* I love this chapter!!!
*tear* So good... made me sniffle, cry... *sob* ...I SOOOOO want a scene like this in Adrift... something good and angsty.... *cries* ...poor, poor John, poor, poor Lizzie.
This is great...very emotional and angst from John is always good *sniff*
It's nice to see more a Keller as well even if I'm still wary of her, lol.