What! "The earth beneath him gaveway" wow this story keeps me in suspense all the time lol!
i absolutely love this story!! update soon :)
NOOOO! Katz! Not Katz! *wails* I hope he doesn't die! Great story! I love it!
Author's Response: I do love Katz...
And thanks...
aww thats so sad, i hope he dosn't die. update soon! :)
Author's Response: Will update in a day or so..
*AHHHHH* What a place to end it....what a place to end it.... please update soon!
Author's Response: will update in a day or so.
Aww... poor Katz- love the fact that Lizzie's so protective of him...can't wait to read what happens next!
Author's Response: I'll update in a day or so..
*squee* Love the end, can't wait to read the next chapter!
oh no I hope Katz makes it! I really hope he is reunited with Melanie! I feel so sorry for everyone. great chapter, update soon please!
Author's Response: I do like him... will update in the next day or so...
You better not kill Katz...*glare* I love him! *offers chocolate* Please?
BTW, you're insanely good at updating.
Author's Response: I love him too!
And I'm just a fast writer...
Nooo! He can't die! *sniffle*
Author's Response: Hmmm. Didn't we say the same things about Carson? Just teasing...
John found Elizabeth! Garron is so horrible. But poor Katz, he doesn't have much luck! I love your characterisation! Update soon please!
Great story! *shakes head* poor Katz *crys* I hope his luck improves!
Author's Response: I'm glad people like him!
Awwww *squees*, love the reunion. Great action...just great!
Author's Response: Thanks! As much as they needed to be apart, I like them together much better!
im so glad john found her before garron could do anything! great chapter! update soon :)
Author's Response: He's evil! It was time for John to sort him out!
just in time! i love what john says at the end!!!! please update very very soon!
Author's Response: He was being scary John!
*screams continuously*
You have to update! Please! Pretty pretty please!
yey John has come to save her! talk about tension - you had me really worried for a moment there!
yay johns saved her! update soon i cant wait for the next chapter!
I've just sat and read the entire story so far and all I can say is: Wow. I love your descriptions of both action and emotions, and the progressing relationship between John and Elizabeth was handled wonderfully.
Quite scared for poor Lizzie in these last few chapters - keep up the awesome writing!
Author's Response: Thanks. This started out as just a thousand or so words... I never intended it to run this long.
Aww...poor Lizzie (((hugs))) ....this is getting SO GOOD! But SOOO suspensful....
*glares and throws things at evil Garron* I dont like him!
Fantastic chapter please update soon!
great chapter! I'm loving this story! i hope john finds her soon though. update soon :)
great chapter. I hope John and the team catch up soon. I like the way Elizabeth and Katz have become friends. I like him, he's a great character
Author's Response: I wantd to get some 'nice' original characters in there, That's why I came up with him, along with Elizabeth's brother and niece.
Aww...poor lizzie (((hugs)))
Agh! I'm caught up, now I have to wait. I just love this story! I can't wait to read more.