I hope John and his team find her soon! I like the bit of action in the story! Good writing!
loving this fic! it just keeps getting better! i cant wait for the next chapter! update soon :)
You are slaying me here and I'm loving every minute of it. Anxiously awaiting next chapter.
Author's Response: Thanks!
*falls off chair* You had me then, lol. *breathes*. Please update soon!
this story just keeps getting better. i cant wait for the next chapter. update soon!
Awww... *hugs Lizzie* ...don't give up girl... *sniff* ...this is such a good story Ggrace (I can call you Grace right?). I am loving it- so many plot twists and turns and angst and ...oh, if only the actual show could be half this good!
*sniffle* I feel so bad for Liz and the guys I hope they get found soon!
Aww...I love Katz, the way he reassured Lizzie... and YAY the team's getting closer! ^_^ What a GREAT story, update soon please!
Fantastic chapter. I cant wait for John to find her *squee*
love this chapter! update soon! i cant stop reading this fic :)
Aww...poor Lizzie doing hard labour, and John freaking and (GRR) Carter being mean and Mathews rearing her ugly head again...can't wait you update.
I love it! It's even better now that you've added something new to the plot of the story!
great chapter! update soon! :)
after the day I have just had, it is such a relief to be able to come home and read some more of your fantastic story. please update soon!
Loving it! Please please please please (I think you get the picture, lol) update soon!
Aww....what an amazing chapter- took my breath away at the end- I totally love Katz..did you make him up? Cause if you did, you did a good job of it.. ^_^ ...Poor John he must be beside himself with worry- but at least Elizabeth is safe...for now...can't wait to read the next chapter. Update soon please!
Author's Response: Yeah, he's my creation. I wanted someone other than Lorne or Ronon to be the one to get Elizabeth out of the predicament, and since he's married... he has a ring... he was the obvious choice.
good chapter,i hope they get back soon or John will have driven all of Atlantis crazy! update soon!
Thank you so much!!!!! Sam's understanding now!! I'm very happy! :) Great writing!
I really enjoyed this chapter.
Aww....Ronan's her bodyguard.... ^_^ How cool is that? ^_^ *does first reviewer dance for this chapter* I loved this chapter, it was totally great, full of John angst and Lizzie teasing- but *sigh* now I have to wait till the next update- I don't like doing that- so update soon please!
Well, I'm glad Carter let him go back. I've heard that for TV shows, once the sexual tension is gone between two people and they get married or something like that, the ratings go down. I don't think it's gone downhill! It's just taken a different turn. But...I'll still keep saying this - I really think Sam and Jack would be more understanding. (sorry if you get tired of hearing it from me)
your story got a little bit another direction, but thats just fine...no need to worry about what one person says when hundreds or thousands of others love it...this one person's just jealous :-)
i hope it will have a happy end...i sooooo hope.
btw: i just noticed it by now...how is it possible that sam can not accept john's resignment? is she even allowed to?
Author's Response: Hmm. I believe he would have signed up for a certain term... that's generally the thing in the military.. so unless his time is up..
I am still loving this story. It's not going down hill at all, IMO it just keeps getting better so dont listen to those people who are being negitive, lol.
It started out as a fantastic story and still is a fantastic story with loads of squeeable moments. I can't wait for the next chapter and I hope you continue writing fanfiction.
I really like your story. I was a bit sad, that it went in this direction, but now I think, it fits. Her thoughts and sorrows are real and they fit to her character. I like your style of writing, you're doing a great job! Update soon!