Such a fun story. I wish I could see what happens after dinner.
All I can say is great job. I really loved this. :)
That good morning kiss was really sweet :^)
Maybe there's a chance for a sequel... what happens during dinner and after?? ;^)
Moi aussi j'ai bien aimé. Et une review en français... aurais je tout de même le droit à un merci ;)
Author's Response: J'ai assez compris pour vous donner un merci (avec des petits erreurs grammaticals, mais c'est acceptable, j'espère!). *g* Je suis heureuse que vous l'avez aimé!
nice story line and idea, but the story felt a bit rushed and almost like only half the story... i felt like i was missing scenes with the other characters and then what had happened to get them in there. but the ending was beautifully done. :) nice job.
Author's Response: True enough, but that would require me writing something with an actual plot. *g*
Thanks for the feedback!
Aw! That was sweet and fluffy and I loved it!
SGC
Author's Response: Thank you!!
Sweet story!
Author's Response: Thanks! :)
I loved that! very true to how I think the characters would act.
Author's Response: Thanks so much!
Ahahaha. I prefer "mutual admiration society president", thank you kindly. ;D
Author's Response: Po-tay-toe, po-tah-toe. :D
Hee. You know I luff this fic.
Author's Response: suck up. :P~
Sweet fic! Great job with their frustrations.
Author's Response: Thank you!!
Awww....I love it. John and his ball reminded me of Jack. It was cute. so was the kiss!
what movie was it?
Author's Response: Well... almost-kiss. They didn't quite make it. *g*
I have no idea. Go with whatever works for you. :D
Author's Response: *smacks forehead* And I just figured out which kiss you meant. Maybe I need to read my own fic one more time. *rolls eyes at self*