Wow...there's a ton going on in this story. I like how surreal it feels. How much like a fairy tale. Still can't wait for the end...
Fantastic chapter!
great story! i love it! please keep writing!
OMG! What is it that John thought he'd never see again?!! This is getting even more interesting with each chapter! Can't wait for the next update! SGC
Oooo....the plot thickens. I love the mystery. It's amazing fun.
Another great chapter, cant wait for more!
i like it! keep it up! thank you for continuing to write so quickly.
Great start! And I just LOVE the idea of being able to jump down a cliff without getting hurt. How cool is that! *lol* Also, the interaction of the characters seems to be just like in the show. Wonderfully done!
I so can't wait till the next chapter! This is so good and interesting! What's gonna happen next? Please update soon!
SGC
Great chapter...very interesting. I can't wait for the next update!
ooh! John has some explaining to do! *grin* Please update soon! And I need more Sparky! lol!
SGC
Great start I can't wait for the next chapter!
Wow! Great beginning and very compelling. I can't wait for the next installment.
Wow! Beautiful, I like it! And John with six-years-Elizabeth is so sweet!
What a cliffhanger! I hope you post the second chapter soon, I can't wait to read it!!
Now I'm going to wait your updates for two fanfics! Sweet! :)
Thanks,
-fex
Oh I love this story. I'm really really excited to see where it's going.
