Ahh that's beautiful. I think i have tears in my eyes! A great story, well done!
Author's Response: Thank you! *hands tissues*
*breaks down into tears*...this is so sad! Brilliant but sad...*grabs tissues*
Author's Response: there there, *hands special sparky tissues*
Oh my this is such a good sad story. I feel so bad for her. great job.
*cries* Oh, god, that was so sad. Lovely writing though, quite moving. Very bittersweet.
Wonderful piece.
Author's Response: *hands sparky tissue* thanks! i've never written a story this spontaneously before so glad you liked it!
cute little bit...it's really lovely
Simple, but nice. I feel like something's missing, but it's hard to get much across in 100 words.
Author's Response: i know! i originally was just going to write it but then decided on drabbles. had to cut out so many bits :(