Good story but where did the kidnapper get the ability to turn invisible? Those people seem rather primitive.
Good story but I don't see Elizabeth as the author. It's too far fetched for me.
It's an interesting story, good mystery building and suspense It's a little confusing at times and I wonder why you use ' instead of " have you considering getting a beta reader?
*stares in shock* OMG! I didn't think it was Elizabeth at all! Great twist there! Wow, nice story.
I'm sad that it's over. Will you write again soon?
Author's Response: Yep, something new coming in a few days :)
Ooooo! please update soon!!
Where's she going?! What's gonna happen? When's the author going to e-mail another story?
Sorry, I'm excited about this story. Great chapter, looking forward to more!
Author's Response: Where's she going?!
- Not telling ;P
What's gonna happen?
- Not telling ;P
When's the author going to e-mail another story?
- Not telling ;P haha, no, im not that evil - Maybe Sunday :)
Wow! Now I'm really intrigued. Please post again soon.
This just keeps getting better and better! What was the name Radek found? Is Lorne going to be okay? Where's Sheppard? Who's got Elizabeth and where are they taking her? So many unanswered questions! can't wait for more!
Author's Response: only 2 more chapters and all of the above will be answered ;)
OMG you've got to carry on!!! You have to write a new chapter soon! Its a brilliant story!
You like your cliffhangers dont you, lol! And I thought I was bad...
As long as you update soon I will try and be patient, TRY being the main word lol. Please dont be too long.
Great chapter!
You like your cliffhangers dont you, lol! And I thought I was bad...
As long as you update soon I will try and be patient, TRY being the main word lol. Please dont be too long.
Great chapter!
Author's Response: I really do like my cliffhangers :) they keep me writting :)
"Let me escort you to the meeting." is pretty cute. Rodney's angsting is also amusing, looks like you're getting serious on us though at the end...
I really like this so far. I'm looking forward to more
Aahhh! Major cliffhanger...how evil of you! I can't believe you would leave it there, you so have to update soon!
Great start by the way :D
