That was so sad! I cryed so hard!
Wow...ouch and kleenexes galore. Beautifully written, reminds me of the stories of elderly men killing their ailing wives out of love, but sadder because they're both so young.
John seems more dead than Elizabeth and I think that's the saddest, most gut-wrechingly wonderful part.
OMG...I can't believe whats happening. I really hope Elizabeth gets through this, as well as John. Please update soon, i need to know what happens!
Eep! Poor Elizabeth. Poor John. Almost feel worse for John. Dealing with pain is one thing, watching someone you care about is something else. I don't have enough fingernails for this story.
Oh wow i love this story. You're not gonna actually kill anyone are you???
Author's Response: ya know, I have yet to decide yet...I always put that in cases when it could go either way... But when I write I sorta don't plan it completely out... So, I'm not even completely sure what's going to go on!
OH, evil Koyla! Don't let anything happen to Elizabeth!...okay, well nothing *that* bad anyway. John's got to get them out of there!
*gasps* Uh oh! No, John, don't give him the code! Oh, poor Elizabeth! Since this is definitely 'hurt', will we get to see some 'comfort' soon?
Cause this story can fit into the hurt/comfort category.
OMG! I'm so nervous! This was a great chapter! I can't wait for you to update this, please make it soon!
aagghh, he'll regret hitting Elizabeth like that!!!
Ooo! Good story so far- love when Kolya shows up. Update soon, kay?
Author's Response: thank you for the review and enthusiasm.
I have the next chapter all written out, but with homework to work on, it seems like I won't have time to type things for a couple days...unless free time just pops up.
Oh no! Great chapter. I'm waiting for more!
Oh no! Great chapter. I'm waiting for more!
Loving the story and looking forward to more :)
im really getting into this story! update soon plz! :)
You should change your title, there's already a big story in this fandom called Salvation.
Author's Response: I might, thank you for the suggestion, I saw that after I had already posted this, but the title works so perfectly for the storyline that for the moment it's going to remain with this title
Woah! Great story idea. I think this is a awesome begining. I hope you continue this soon!
Author's Response: thanks! hopefully I'll be able to get at least a good chunk done before school starts here in a couple days...
oh cool story! update soon plz!