Reviewer: anniegetyourgun Signed Date: May 05, 2008 - 11:50 am Title: Looking for a Reason

A very nice, well-written ending for Liz and Sam. I like how you kept it bordering between intense and friendly. I like how Liz didn't divulge too much info on her team until John showed up. Very fitting and is showing that she trusts him more and more.

I love the peanut gallery look John gave Lorne. Made me giggle.

Waiting for next chapter. =)

Author's Response: Thank you so much. Earlier drafts had things more intense but when I finally got to editing & finalizing, I softened it. anything else was redundant. Plus, I like the friends aspect. rnrnNope - she was very secretative until someone she trusted showed up.rnrnGlad you got a laugh. I had just heard that term and couldn't get it out of my head so I used it where I thought it fit best.rnrnThanks for reading & the comment.

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