Awesome writing! I love your style. You "show" the scenery and the action instead of "tell"ing it, and your descriptions are excellent. You should definitely write more! :-) Well done on your first one!
Author's Response: Thank you! There will definitely be more... This is a whole new shiny fandom for me, so I've got plenty of stuff to work with...
Wow, this is a spectacular piece. I like these works that aren't quite stories but more of a collection of moments. This could be so realistic, if onlly they wrote more of these moments into the story. I really love this piece; your writting is fantastic.
Author's Response: Thank you! This was my first foray into SGA (I'm a newbie to this fandom) and I have a couple of others up my sleve (*g*). I had the first two vignettes in my head (the idea of the stained glass really, really stuck in my head) and the rest simply grew from there. I'm glad you liked it!
Author's Response: And the word is "sleeve". I should never post early in the morning.