Very funny. I like that the Flood worked out in Elizabeth's favor. Hours alone with HOT SEXY JOHN SHEPPARD Oh I feel for you LIZ.
well...i thought it was a cute story :]
well...i thought it was a cute story :]
hehe cute! and to the other person who posted the first comment, maybe u should read the author notes before ranting on and on. i thought this was well written especially after such a long shift. good on ya :)
Author's Response: on behalf of rebakathy - Thank you :)
First of all I must state that it is very wrong to post someone else's work under your own pen name. If they don't have access to the internet, at least be decent enough to set her up an account and post it under there. Otherwise it looks like you're just taking credit for her work, which is completely rude and wrong.
As for this story...the grammar needs improvement and the characterizations are really bad. There really is no excuse to post something so bad when there are beta services readily available not only on Command Dynamics, but several others sites and communities. The resources are there. They're free. Use them.
Also, I would never personally post something for someone else (I would of course be posting it to their OWN account) so bad without at least being kind enough betaing it for them first.
Author's Response: firstly, I posted all over this that it was written by her, its even in the title - she asked me to post it and I dont think she wants an account.
Secondly - if you'd have read the information, it was written in half an hour after a 12 hours shift so you should be able to forgive the grammar problems.
Lastly, I didnt ask you to be so rude, next time, try emailing me instead posting it on a review.
Author's Response: oh and by the way, flanting someone elses story because you're a bad beta isn't a good thing!