Fantastic as always! :D
Gooood chapter. :) Glad that Elizabeth finally got to watch the Princess Bride, and her conversation with Sam was lovely. Looking forward to a little more to read! :)
I can only tell you again how much I love this story! :D
Awww!! I just looooooved Jack and Elizabeth's conversation. It's great because in the series, they could be together, but then they could also be brother and sister. I absolutely love the brother and sister relationship here, and I really hope you write more with those two!! All of the John/Elizabeth bits were fabulous, and I'm really glad this clarified who Mab was, exactly. I feel better finding out that she is ascended, an ancient, instead of someone else left over! Thank you for clearing that up. And she finally fell asleep! Very cute. And I hope Teyla gets better! Cannot wait for the next chapter...
Poor woobie Lizzie! *hugs her* Awesome chapter as always. Can't wait to read more.
Awww, poor baby. And by that I mean Lizzie rather than the unborn one...
Hehe!! I love Jack and Elizabeth's moments!! And yep, he's so not stupid!
Can't wait for more!
*steals Lizzie and takes her away someplace safe*
Oh god! I sure hope Elizabeth and the baby will be okay. I have this irking feeling that the baby isn't... And Queen Mab was based on Queen Mab from Romeo & Juliet, right? Cause goodness, you had her spot-on. I'm so glad they found Jack and Woolsey in one piece too, and they have a ZedPM! This is fantastic. Cannot wait for the next update.
Your killing me here... your cliffhangers are deadly :) More soon please... REAL soon :)
Ohmigod!! That was sooo good. Loved the whole thing, and I'm so very excited for more. Don't have much to say about this chapter. I really loved the Star Wars comment. Hehe. They have to get Jack and Woolsey and come back alive! And the alien female? I wonder if she's a hologram or a real person. Maybe an Asuran left over and not killed? Hmmm... more, please!
This was beautiful. I especially loved Elizabeth and John's goodbye, and his insistance that she not stay alone if anything happened. Something about that just grabbed me. Can't wait for the next chapter.
OMGS Who????
Great work. :)
evil, evil cliffhanger! :(
But great chapter! I love this fic! :)
Who is it?
And yep they will come back 'cos John has to be there for Elizabeth and the baby!
Great chapter! Can't wait for more!
I really like this story. I think you are doing really great in getting the characters' voices. One thing though, you have John switching Lizzie's coffee for water when everyone knows she's pregnant but she still has it after... you might want to correct that..
great job!
Author's Response: fixed.
Thanks!
Have been reading this fic for a while now and just wanted to say: I love it!
And great new chapter! :)
This was such a fabulous chapter. I loved Rodney's concern for Elizabeth. Rodney and Elizabeth's relationship is so wonderful, and I'm really glad you touched on that, and I just looooved Rodney getting grossed out over John and her having sex. Hehe! I also absolutely adored John's "I want you" speech, as well as the "I want to live with you" one, including those wonderful sentences: "I like to read my book. I pick up my socks." Sooo cute. So very John as well. You are really on top of the characters in this story, which I love. But things said may not have necessarily be statements that have been said or that will ever be said, but it feels like everything said could actually be said by those people. Loved that whole scene of John and Elizabeth in their new quarters. Also really loved the infirmary scene. The ending was very sweet, but it was also really sad and good that she realized that if anything were to happen to the baby due to carelessness, it would break him, when she says, "It's okay now?". I love that both Carson and John are so concerned for her wellbeing, and for the baby's. There was some other moment I really liked, but I can't remember what it was... Can't seem to find it either. Anyway, I really loved the entire chapter, so it probably doesn't need to be pinpointed.
*nods* Knew if it bothered either of them it would be Lizzie.
Awww! This is still great! I hope everything will be fine with the pregnancy. Oh and that they'll rescue Jack!
awww.. that was lovely. great story! im really into it! update soon! :)
*le sigh* So I had to read this twice, cause the first time I read it, I didn't leave a responce, and it's been a couple of days...
Anyway, I reeeaally loved that talk towards the beginning as John and Elizabeth walked to find Rodney. Well, more towards the middle. Such a good talk, and it all played out perfectly. Made me very happy.
And Carson knows she's pregnant!! That's awesome. Now, they will have someone to help fly the other jumper. But I just realized, it's probably the baby who has the gene! I mean, how could it not, since John's gene is so strong, and the baby would have some of his DNA. And Elizabeth crying at the end? So sad... I can just imagine what's going through her head right now. Great work, and I cannot wait for the next chapter!