i like the chapter! it's great! i love how elizabeth is like embarassed at who the information came from! very nicely done
oooooo great start!!!! i really like the details you use!
You really cathed the personalities of the main characters! So, Chapter 2 is great as well, carry on, because I just can't wait to see what will happen!
Cool, another chapter already!
Ooooh, nice set up. The Genii was a good touch.
Looking forward to more!
Wow, good start. How are they gonna get out of this? And what else will happen while they're there?
Author's Response: Thank you! Hopefully I'll be posting the rest of this soon so you don't have to wait long!
what are they gonna do? please, i need to know!
Author's Response: Well...chapter 2 is up, but I guess that doesn't really answer what they're gonna do. Promise to have more up soon!
Brilliant start, and what can I say? Hoping you'll carry on soon!!!
Author's Response: Thank you! Chpater 2 is up and more on the way... :)
hehe, awesome. loved beta-ring this story! :)
Author's Response: The thanks is all to you for the beta-ing! :)