oh yes, this is where the fun begins!!!
*tee hee* What a good chapter.... *tee hee*
Tease! So who's at the door this time?
Cute ending. Ready for more!
Niiiice chapter! Loved John realizing his feelings, and very nice kiss. :) Can't wait for the next chapter!
EHEHEHEHEHHEHE *claps happily* THAT IS SO CUTE!!!! EHEHEHEHE
okay...i'm good now, but yes! wonderfully done! great john/elizabeth shipper-ness! i love the ending to the chapter too! i could so see and hear them saying the last set when they realize there's knocking at the door.
^_^ I'm loving this story! But you HAVE to update soon!
Author's Response: Workin' on it...just waiting for Chapter 8 to come back from my betas.
Ha! Love the referene to the Dick Van Dyke show!
Author's Response: It was one of my mother's favorite shows - I think we watched the reruns of that show a gazillion times!
Oo! Oo! Very good! Liking this story- a lot!
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm glad you're enjoying it so far.
*tee hee* loved that little interaction at the end- it was such a John-Elizabeth conversation! This is an intruiging story. Looking forward to reading the next chapter
Author's Response: Thank you! I love writing their conversations! Except now I seem to keep distracting them from talking with...other things. Eek...I'm spoiling my OWN story!
Oh- smart Elizabeth- trusting the Genii....^_^ Good story so far, looking forward to reading the next chapter.
Author's Response: Yeah, Elizabeth can be too trusting. Really, though, the Genii are just a plot device here!
wooo!!! very nice John/Elizabeth emotion and playful chapter! love it! still wanna know what they're up to taking them in the opposite direction! can't wait for your next chapter!
Author's Response: Thank you! One of the things that drew me to Sparky was their playful banter. I'm glad you get that feeling from this chapter!
Love it! I hope there will be some more very soon?
Author's Response: Thank you! I try to post regularly, sometimes my muse is less than cooperative...and I can be lazy.
Wow, that's a surpise. Loved the bed line...'sleeping with you'. That was great! Great job. Awaiting the next update!
Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it. It was one of those scenes that I wish everyone who read it could jump in my head and picture the look I could see on John's face. Just...wicked. ;)
I love the inuendo in this story. Keep working on chapter 8 'cause I can't wait for more!!!
Author's Response: I'm glad you're enjoying it, Chapter 8 will be up very soon. It just waits for approval from my betas.
oooooo where are they being taken? wonderfully done! add more soon!
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm sorry it's taken me so long to respond! More is on the way...
Awsome job. can't wait to see what happens next.
please update soon.
Author's Response: Thank you, I'm so glad you're enjoying it! More is coming.
Ahhh!!! Where are they going?!
Update soon. Great chapter, by the way.
Cute hand holding!
Author's Response: Of course, by now you know sort of where they were going. And hand holding is just the beginning (Mwah, hah, hah, hah!)
I'm so happy you updated!!! Another great chapter here. Can't wait for more! Please don't make me wait a long time, I'm really interested in this story!
nice chapter, i'd like to know what's going through the minds of these Abrecan. Know what their agenda is and what they want from the group. And why they would just let them go...or do they?
V. interesting storyline! Hope you'll carry on!
i like how you're filling in the spaces!!! great storyline!
Wow! Two more great chapters. The joke at the end of 3 was great! Keep going, I love it!
Nice! Especially liked Elizabeth surprising John in the end!
EHEHEHEHEHEHE i love the ending lines! SO GREAT!!! heehhehehe *sighs* The Long Goodbye was wonderful! I love how you tie it in