zomg. like holy bananas.
when John tells Elizabeth to tell him to stop - like omg....its like John Sheppard in a Jar, such a perfect perfect characterization.
Well the whole piece was perfect in that way... and every other way. Loved it!
Don't hate it and don't apologise, it's beautiful :-)
Splendid you fic...
Author's Response: Thank you!
I'm just here to repeat myself. ;D You know I love this. I keep revisiting it!
Author's Response: Thanks, hon. :) *hugs*
I second and third those WOWs! beautifully erotic as opposed to smut and porn (lol) my kinda love scene. expertly written.
Author's Response: Thank you so much for your kind feedback! I'm really glad to know you enjoyed the fic (and yeah, sometimes you just need the sappy lovemaking scene as opposed to the smut, no?) *g*
I second and third those WOWs! beautifully erotic as opposed to smut and porn (lol) my kinda love scene. expertly written.
wow...just wow....I love this. You captured everything so perfectly. The whole thing flowed so well I was kinda sad when it ended....it was just such a beautiful story!
Author's Response: Aw, thank you for such lovely feedback! I'm really happy to know you enjoyed this fic, and thanks for taking the time to let me know. Does an ego good. *g*