I know you probably wrote that story ages ago, but I've only just read it and thought it was really, really good. You can get into these long stories! Great job.
i really looking forward for the last chapter
Author's Response: Than i shall give it! There's no violence or action it it, but it ties up the loose ends and stuff!
Hooray for John waking up! Nice medical work, and lovely angsting on Elizabeth's part. It's truly sweet how much they've come to rely on each other.
Author's Response: Tanku very much!! i'm glad you liked it!! :)
omg sooo evil! Leaving it like that was soo mean!!! Tis brill though! PLease post more asap! :)
Author's Response: This is the same review but i don't mind!!!! It increases my review tally, hehe!!!
omg sooo evil! Leaving it like that was soo mean!!! Tis brill though! PLease post more asap! :)
Author's Response: Thank you very much. There's only two chapters to go so it should be finished next week!
brilL! please post more asap! :)
Author's Response: Okey dokey! Should post the next chapter sometime today!!
Aahh! I can't believe you left it there. I'm on pins and needles. Please post soon.
Author's Response: mwah hahaha!!! MAybe i won't post anymore and you'll never know what happens..... no, im not that cruel!!
Great story, I'm enjoying myself so much! I think you have done a wonderful work with the Sheppard's character! Please, update as soon as possible and please again, don't beat John anymore! ;)
Author's Response: Thank you very much. I'm sorry.... there's a little more shep-whump to come, but its not that bad.....!
really great!! please post more asap! :-)
Author's Response: okey dokey, just need to find myself some posting time!
I really like the story, very well written keep up the good work.
Author's Response: Thank you very much!! Im glad that you like it! Keep reading.
awwwww poor John! I love how he's so upset about his broken jumper! ROFL like a little boy having his toy broken!
Author's Response: Yeah, i just thought if he had to choose between saving mckay and saving his puddle jumper, he'd pick the puddle jumper!!
Bug Patrol - fab name!!!
"I take it that's bad?"
UhOh!!
Author's Response: hee hee, i like that chapter the best i think!! Keep reading!
another great chapter! another update soon? please?
Author's Response: Ahhhh...... okay then!!!!!
Yay! I love this story. You are such a wonderful writer. Can't wait for more!
That sucks you haven't seen ANY of season three!! Feel really bad for you! I't's worth the wait though...trust me!
Author's Response: Awwww... thanks! Can't wait for season three now!!!!! (T_T)
hey, i fellow english person! yay!
its so annoying bout the new seasons eh? im already counting down the days! (55, i think) *looks down ashamed*
anyway the story is still really good! shep whumping! yay! always good! please update soon!
Author's Response: Glad you like it. I can't wait for the new season. And i'll update with pleasure!!!!!
I live in englang too but I download the episodes, if your interested in getting hold of those episodes I'd be more than happy to help.
Author's Response: Yeah i was thinking of downloading but my internet is really rubbish. (T_T)
This is really great!!
So, What is the plan?????
Author's Response: Ha Ha Ha (that's my evil laugh btw!) you find out soon!
omg! you cant stop there! glad you'll be posting soon! hope you're gonna continue with the whole guilt bout choking thing cos it should have been looked into more and your approach looks good!
Author's Response: Hee hee glad you liked it. Don't worry there'll be more 'conversion' stuff in there. Thanks for reviewing!!
great story. Can't wait for you to update....soon I hope?
Author's Response: yeah, i'm really sorry. I've finished the story.... just haven't put it up yet.... i'm soooo sorry :-(
this story is really good! well done! i like the whole set-up and am looking forward to the angst thing soon, hopefully! keep it coming!
Author's Response: Thank you. The action starts in the next couple of chapters!! Keep posted!!
I like this story so far, but I'm curious to see when the angst/violence is going to come in. I'd also be willing to beta for you if you'd like. I like your writing style (from what I've seen). I'm good with grammar and pretty good with everything else. Just let me know! Keep the story going! :-)
Author's Response: Thanks. Um... do I just send each chapter to your e-mail address? I'm kind of new to this... Thanks for the review also!!
please carry on, I really want to know what happens.
Author's Response: Yeah, i've already written it out. Just having problems with posting. Argh, stupid computer!!
Sounds good so far. Gimme MORE.
Author's Response: I plan to post the next chapter really soon. i promise!!!
I'm interested so far... You've gotten the two down fairly well. I can still spot a couple of spelling/grammar mistakes that you might want to point out to your beta.
Author's Response: Yeah i'll try to keep them down to a minimum and give my sister a vigorous slap!!! i'll post the next chapter soon.