THis is a great story. Btw Aiden Ford's name is spelled "Aiden". Please update very soon.
omg no! my poor john! - lol, for your sake he better come back xx
you cant leave it there! is John really dead????? you have to update soon!!!!!! i love this story its one of the best I've read but update soon! and plz make John come back to life!!
nooo! update soon plz!
nooo! update soon plz!
I really enjoy this concept (I hadn't actually run into any 'Elizabeth arrives in Atlantis pregnant fics before), but I think it might benefit from another pass from a different Beta. There is a rather high percentage of incorrect word usage, and you've consistantly mis-spelled Lt. Aiden Ford's first name incorrectly. This isn't meant as a personal attack, merely some advice that I don't think you've got the best mesh of beta as of the publication of this piece. I know I wouldn't write nearly as well as I do if I didn't have my beta.
I'm new here and this is the first fic here I've read.... I love it. Just continue quickly, will ya? ;)
pleasepleasepleaseplease update soon i really want to kno what happens
How could you leave it there??? You are the queen of cliff-hangers! I know he'll be all right, but jeez, could you be a little easier on the heart? hehehe Please can we have some more? Sam :)
I look forward the rest too
Your story was great. My sister said it a death grip she couldnt remove her butt from her seat. and when i tried to pull her off she said back of barbie reading now. She wants to know happens at Christmas. PLEASE WRITE THE REST.