I have to agree about that episode. It is painful to watch and one of my least favorites. It's up there with that scene with ELizbeth and Mike. Now that one I truly hate. If they don't let Sparky have a real kiss without alien involvement, how can they make us suffer through Elizabeth with some obnoxious guy? He was about as likable as Simon Wallace. I loved your ending much more. It was so obvious she was pissed. I like that line when she says no he can't be alone with that (I shouldn't say it but I will) trashy ancient. Enjoyed this so much.
Author's Response: Oh don't even get me started on Mike! But yeah, completely agree with you; so should have let Sparky happen, they're just so perfect! And I think 'trashy ancient' is the polite way of putting it :P thanks for reviewing! :)
MUCH more satisfying than the actual episode! :-) Terrific job!
Author's Response: xD thanks but tbh i think anything is more satisfying than that episode :P
Love happy endings! Great story!
Author's Response: :) thank you