So is chapter nine the last chapter? Or will there be more? I was hoping for more. This is an excellent story.
Author's Response: That's all of it, though we are discussing a sequel.
Great story. Seems fitting that the final element is life. Though if Elizabeth's now pregnant, the IOA will have a fit, regardless of the fact that she and John saved the city.
Author's Response: I know, we've been discussing the possibility of a sequel, but it might not happen for quite some time.
I'm looking forward to the next chapter. Please update very soon.
This is one of my favorites from last years big bang. It's so nice to read it again. :)
Author's Response: Happy to help :)
Ah. That's where I know it from :D
Author's Response: Never hurts to read it again :)
Well, you certainly like to leave us guessing. It gets more interesting with every sentence. Though what the Ancients feared should be a really powerful enemy. Can't wait for more.
Author's Response: I love leaving cliffhangers :) I try to do it as often as possible.
I'm liking this a great deal. The little girl is quite puzzling, although my first thought was Atlantis trying to communicate to John through some physical form. My guess, through human interaction? Anyways, can you please continue? I love a good mystery. =) *salute*
Author's Response: You and me both - next chapter later on today :)
Interesting start-though I'm sure I've read this somewhere before. Have you resubmitted this?
Author's Response: No, the only place this has ever been is on the big bang website.
Nice beginning and the girl is interesting. At this point in time, I think that she is either Atlantis, an Ancient made child like Orlin or an ascended form of an alternate Elizabeth. Can't wait until you write more. Good work and keep it up.
Author's Response: Those are some interesting theories, I wish I had those ideas a year ago :)