i don't usually go for the whole AU thing too often. but i really enjoyed this story...so much fun, LOVED the Rocky Horror Picture Show thing (and the idea as Lizzie as Magenta!:P), very cute!
Author's Response: Thanks, I'm glad you enjoyed it. I typically don't like AU stuff too, but I hadn't written anything since college (I'm still in my 20's :). I used this plot bunny to warm up my writing muscles.
W-w-what? This is it? Oh..
Thanks for writing this =) Without doubt was one of the best multi-chapter stories I've ever read. Yes, as a non-American I got the whole 'giving-the-jacket-to-your-girl' thing. Very clever. LOL Elizabeth as a wild thing? Yee-ha. *salute* I had a great time reading this.
Author's Response: Glad you liked it and thank you. I thought Lizzie should go ahead make the first move.
LOL. Had me laughing in my seat. *moves to the next chapter* Really good -loved it all. *salute*
Author's Response: Thanks, I realized why I don't like to write song and dance numbers.
*claps*
That was a great treat, lots of fun and very entertaining! I loved it all, from beginning to the end - I shall miss them all. Thank you for this story!
Author's Response: Glad you liked it and thank you.
Awww, John got the girl. And Ronon had better choose VA Tech.
Author's Response: Thanks and hope you enjoyed. I figured a little mention to all of our favorite football teams would be nice.
SQUEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!
I love it!!!!!! The ending is so fluffy and sweet and awwwwww :^D
Thank you so much for this... it made my day :^D
Author's Response: Thanks, I'm glad you liked it. Fluff is hard for me to write.
Aww! The time period for this story being made, was well worth the wait!
That was so cute. I'm suprised that Elizabeth just let John's action fly like that. Putting his arm around her. But *squee* was great conversation and plot. Hope you don't give me another damn cliff hanger anytime soon, otherwise I'll join Anuna with her pitchforks and fire. :) *salute*
Author's Response: Glad you liked it and thank you. Now, Elizabeth did put her head on his shoulder first :) When a girl does that, I take it as a sign putting the arm around her acceptable. It hasn't gotten me slapped, yet lol. Fear not, no more cliff hangers.
Yay for the kiss :^D
And the soundtrack sounds amazing :^)
Any chance for another chapter? ;^)
Author's Response: Thank you. I should post another chapter by Thursday morning. Hopefully Wednesday morning.
Can you say "pitchfork"?
This is my favorite chapter so far. He has a crush on her but doesn't really understand what's going on. And he hugged her! I loved it, all of it, I loved Ronon and how he wanted to visit John's mom. Now, please, don't let us wait this long for another chapter. No pressure. :)
Author's Response: Glad you liked it. I thought we needed to see the "big teddy bear" side Ronon. I hope you liked John and Liz kissing at the end.
I'd like to hear the rest of this =) I enjoyed this chapter. Mmm.. Elizabeth is loosening up a bit. *salute*
Author's Response: Thanks. Just posted the next chapter. I hope you enjoy.
oooooh, she's gonna visit John isn't she... please let her visit John!!
Author's Response: Ehhhh, I cant give too much away. But... The next chapter got cut (I have the whole story written, but I don't post it all at once) where Liz would go visit John's house was called "Meatloaf and Mrs. Sheppard". So, I have to go re-edit, which could take some time.
*pulls out pitchforks and torches* You're going to leave us there????????
Author's Response: I hope the rating means you liked it a little bit. Cliffhanger; dun dun dun.
oh boy. Remember how I mentioned cutting a chapter might cause some production delays. I cut the would-be-next chapter (it was titled Meatloaf and Mrs. Sheppard). So now I have to do some editing... I just realized I've become one of those PTB that messes wit the fans. I feel bad now.
absaloutely love it please write more !. youve done yourself proud !! =)
Author's Response: Thank you. Don't worry, more will come. Hopefully an new chapter or two, depending on how things go.
I might let you live after all *grin* That was perfect!
Author's Response: Whew! Thank you. I'm glad you enjoyed.
YAY! This story is always worth reviewing. =) I'm kinda betting that you wanted to replicate the hug in the Siege Part III? You succeeded. I hope we can see more hugs. Just a little note here to: You're story feels natural. It's a great quality to possess; such as the way you move the characters and the interactions they perform. *proud salute*
Author's Response: Thank you. Yes, I wanted to recreate "The Hug" feeling. Glad you enjoyed.
Still going strong. Sounds like high school to me. And John's done for now.
Author's Response: Thanks.
Squee!!! That hug is the sweetest :^)
Sorta reminds me off the hug at the end of 'The Siege' ;^)
And of course that hug feels right.
I also like the part where John stares at Elizabeth and then tells on himself ;^)
Author's Response: Thank you. Recreating "The Hug" was my goal. Who wouldn't stare at Liz doing gymnastics.
Can't believe I didn't see this before... *chastises self* I totally love it... and the sexual tension that's building between them... DANG!!! Totally Awesome!! More please!!
Author's Response: Thanks. Just wait til Shep sees Liz in the next chapter.
Write more or I will come with a pitchfork after you! This was great and my sparky protection didn't hold out. *ded*
Author's Response: Oh boy. More will come, eep.
This is great. The relationship slowing building up between John and Elizabeth is great. Sexual tension much? I really hope to hear more from you, I'd love to see where this is going and how their friendship grows. =) *salute*
Author's Response: Just wait, there's more coming.
I'm really loving this, and echoing SR's comment about the slow progression of the relationship. Also, waiting for Elizabeth to loosen up! I see John as an adventurer intriguing enough to convince her to join him on an adventure.
The sport bits find me confuddled because I'm not a native speaker and pretty much clueless about football. What is a "JV player"?
Author's Response: For High School sports, there's a Varsity and Junior Varsity. Varsity is the best players like starters. JV is usually freshman and sophomore athletes, they usually get to play games on different days than varsity.
I like your slow build up of the relationship. Intrigued by the Teyla comment also.
Just a little niggle. Elizabeth seems too perfect. I'm hoping John can loosen her up a bit.
Author's Response: I'm trying to keep Liz on the demure side. That's just how the character struck me, nice and personable. I tried using the lack of movie knowledge to show she doesn't really use her free time. Nose stuck in a book and always busy with activities. She tries to hide her laughter and John's jokes, trying to keep things business. Trying to keep her button down but not uptight. But don't worry, she'll loosen up.
More please!! I love the way their friendship is so slowly growing. Right now on the outside they still look like teacher and student, but you can see there's more. I also want to know what Teyla meant with that comment ;^)
Author's Response: Thanks. Next chapter is more John and his football side. Don't worry, there's a few insty wintsy sparks. Fear not though, I'm just giving you time to get the proper safety gear for Chapter 6.
Still loving it. You're keeping it lively and realistic, and that is what I personally like to see. Well done in keeping them in character and I'd like to hear you update on this! *salute*
Author's Response: Thanks, it can be a pain sometimes. Like the John Wayne reference, I don't think references John Wayne in the sow, but he references movies. Trying to show Liz likes his jokes with only little smirks and brow raises, it gets hard to make the budding attraction obvious.
*grins*
I can't wait to read more!!!!
Your characterization is absolutely perfect.
Awesome job!!