Okay, lol, I think I forgot to read this one -my bad, I'm sorry. Woah. I'm a massive football fan and I loved the way you write about the game. The liveliness it great, oh, and I agree with Red, most other High School fics are extremely immature. It's gets very tiresome. You take it out of that awful category and create your own unique new one. Congrats, and keep writing. *prepares to plea* lol. *salute*
Author's Response: Thank you. I trying to walk the line around "The OC" (which I did like) overly angsty teen drama.
"Arguing with a Marine is like smashing your head against a brick wall.” Tell me about it. I've been married to one for quite a few years. LOL
Very well written. I loved the football stuff. Don't expect this much description in my fic. I'm aiming for the general audience.
Most fics I've read that portray them as high schoolers have been very...immature. I like the way you keep them true to themselves yet youthful.
Author's Response: Thank you very much. I tried to keep the football basic as possible. I could add a note saying what dime, shotgun, and cover 2man under mean. I do try to keep their personalities, so the vote of confidence helps.
Alrighty, I just read this chapter and the lsat one and they were fantastic. The characterization skills you possess are amazing. The way you write is easy to read and yeah -very easy to picture for a person like myself. Well done. *proud salute*
Author's Response: Thanks for the vote of confidence. Did you like Thunderstruck? It was meant to be fast paced and choppy. It's meant to be Moc-epic (making something trivial sound important), you know how us football players love to glorify ourselves :)