Wow this was your first Atlantis fan fiction. Well you did an amazing job. This is got to be one of my favorite stories. It is incredible how you brought about their past lives and inter mingled them with their present. I felt the SPARKY passion.
Nice, never read a fic in this kinda style before. I like it, good job ^^
That was amazing. I love the mirrored dissatisfaction and general 'meh' feeling they both had about their lives pre-kiss.
Author's Response: Thank you. This was the first SGA fic that I ever wrote, something that I have kind of based these characters on for my future fics.
Very beautifully written... Also a nice way to tell something about their history before Atlantis.
I seem to like all of your stories, so...
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awwww. wow! that was so good. i love your writing style, nice job
Author's Response: Thank you.