Aw, John is so cute in this chapter. I am really enjoying this, keep the good work up.
Author's Response: Thank you and I will try to keep John cute ;-)
The next chapter will folow as soon as it has been proofread
Aw please!!! You're gonna kill me with this amount of UST! Dang!
But it's good! Love love love it!!
So very happy to see a new chapter of this story. They are just so cute together at the end.
Why this short? I want more!!! *wails*
Author's Response: Coming as soon as posible, I promise
Can't wait for the new one. Sometimes it feels strange seeing John react like this - pushing her away- I always thought it would be just the opposite. But then I'm really interested how this turns out and I hope he comes to his senses. I'll patiently wait for more of this.
Author's Response: The new chapter is up, enjoy!
Gosh my world is empty too!! He is acting like a jerk, isn't it about time to break him? Poor Lizzie. Bad boy John!
Author's Response: I hope you like the next chapter ... :)
Oh yeah just few minutes... right!!! This was brilliant, I love this now please don't make us wait too long for the next chapter!!!
Author's Response: Thank you, I will do my best, but no promisses at the moment, sorry.
*has a heart attack* Y'know, you just can't leave it like that, your poor readers will suffer! ;) Hehehe, looking forward to John's reaction. ;)
Author's Response: ironically I was struck down with the flu myself... It will take me a while before I can post the next chapter.
I'm really intrigued and can't wait for more. Great work!
Author's Response: Thank you, I will update soon
Ah!! Now I can breathe again! You so scared me with the last chapter. I hope they will be nice to each other again. It' so strange to see them distance from one another. Update soon, sweetie!
Author's Response: I hope I did not cause any nightmares ;-)
Oooh. I like the narration and the angst. Always good to see a story with proper spelling and grammar in this place. :P
Looking for foward to more.
Author's Response: Thank you, also on behalf of my two beta's. I will post new chapters soon.
Oh my God!
More! ASAP!
Author's Response: Working on it :)
Very interesting! I'll be waiting for your updates!
Okay and what next??? Please write more!