This is one of my favorites from last years big bang. It's so nice to read it again. :)
Author's Response: Happy to help :)
Ah. That's where I know it from :D
Author's Response: Never hurts to read it again :)
I'm liking this a great deal. The little girl is quite puzzling, although my first thought was Atlantis trying to communicate to John through some physical form. My guess, through human interaction? Anyways, can you please continue? I love a good mystery. =) *salute*
Author's Response: You and me both - next chapter later on today :)
Interesting start-though I'm sure I've read this somewhere before. Have you resubmitted this?
Author's Response: No, the only place this has ever been is on the big bang website.
Nice beginning and the girl is interesting. At this point in time, I think that she is either Atlantis, an Ancient made child like Orlin or an ascended form of an alternate Elizabeth. Can't wait until you write more. Good work and keep it up.
Author's Response: Those are some interesting theories, I wish I had those ideas a year ago :)