Very well written and very much a 'missing scene.' In my mind, if ever there should have been a point when they shared their feelings it was then. Well - until I saw The Siege III, then it was after *that* ep. The emotions were well written and actually got me misty eyed. One of my favorite sections was: He never expected to fall in love. It was the furthest thing from his mind when he joined this expedition. Yet there was just something about Elizabeth Weir that had quietly taken hold of his heart until she held it in the palm of her hand. He didn't know if she was aware of what she held in her possession, but he hoped she would never let it go. There are a couple of spelling/grammar type of errors. Nothing a beta reader or even another read through from you wouldn't catch, I'm sure.