Reviewer: lostgrace Signed Date: September 20, 2007 - 09:31 pm Title: I don't think so

Very cute!

Reviewer: shannyfish Signed Date: January 21, 2007 - 02:07 am Title: I don't think so

cute dialogue. i would like to see some more detailing. still would suggest a beta reader for grammar and formatting...and they could also help with ideas with detailing throughout the little bit. nice little idea :)

Reviewer: Oparu Signed Date: January 16, 2007 - 04:16 pm Title: I don't think so

Your dialogue is good. It's cute...there are a few things I would elaborate on.

Author's Response: Thanks for the compliment about the dialogue, but what would you elaborate on? I'm always open to feedback and suggestions.

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