I enjoyed this story. I can see them meeting at an earlier time and falling so fast for each other. From the second they locked eyes in SGA there was a bond that couldn't be broken. SPARKY 4ever. Great job and hot hot.
I've just re-read this and liked it as much as the first time! Gotta love a horny couple... hehehehe Tan.
I have a feeling they'll change it too: whatever happens in Atlantis, stays in Atlantis ;^)
I always wondered why John grinned like that in "The Rising". Now I know, LOL!! I 'm loving this, please continue!!!
Oh, I really loved this fic. Like Bunnies! I love it *G*You have a good kind of writing such hot things, keep going :)
I really love this story! I wish I could be in Elizabeths place...
Author's Response: Thanks! And who wouldn't? ;)
this chapter they seem out of character, and maybe that's another reason its AU...but they seem like horny teenagers... I also wasn't sure if there's no Simon? I guess it seems like we're missing a lot of background and you just throw us into the story...
Author's Response: Well, that's the purpose of smut, isn't it? And it's AU which means I can make them as out of character as I deem fit. The story is not over and some things will be revealed later in the story, so either you can wait for it or don't read the fic anymore.
this is an interesting little story...and I know it's AU, but John sounds like he's like 10 in the second scene. But other than that it looks pretty good.
I unterstand better the rating M
That could be funny to imagine the reaction from these 2, 3 years later when they meet on Atlantis.
désolé pour mon anglais...