Please update this very soon! You're killing me here with the suspense!
Hey, great story. Love it, but can you please hurry up with the next chapter, cause its been like months since you posted chapter 9. Love that Elizabeth is so strong. Hope to read more soon.
Great story! Love how strong Elizabeth is, but would you please hurry up with the next chapter, its been like months since you updated.
Great story, we all can't wait for the next chapter so hurry up. :)
Ya know, with John being who he is, I was hoping that he was just kidding about forgetting everything, and maybe he still is??? :o) Anyhow, good story, different pace. Just save everyone. Oh and one thing, why couldn't Rodney have just lost his ability to speak? Trying to see him be himself while mute woulda been funny!
Author's Response: Heheh, I should've. Then I wouldn't have had to write him! Darn it! I'll give you a hint (he's not...sad...I know). That was a crappy hint. But hopefully the next chappy will be up soon! Thanks for reviewing! *grin*
I think I'm going to cry! They better be fine *looks all threatening*...dont make me come through this screen, lol.
Great chapter :D
Author's Response: They'll be okay! *shifty eyes* Um. Please don't come through the screen. *cower* Thanks!
Just read this through and I reall enjoyed it. Great stuff, I can't wait for the rest.
Author's Response: yay! Thanks!
i love this story! update soon!
Author's Response: Yay! Thank you so much! I will!
Please update soon! Im really enjoying this!
Author's Response: Yay! I will; I should be able to write some more now that I don't have my paper to write. *whistle*
interesting. i like it!
Author's Response: Thanks! I'll update soon. :)
Okey, loved the whole luau thing with coconuts, athosian children coloring and rondney's helping...
V. funny, needs some more chapters, and by the way, your username is brilliant! So, keep on going!;)
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I love the kids coloring; it just seemed like something that I'd do as a kid. I like my username too!
“So, what size coconut are you?”
Okay. Officially best line ever. :D
Author's Response: Thanks! I was trying to figure out what he'd say just before he left and BANG! It came to me in the shower. I started laughing hysterically and my mother didn't understand the joke. Of course, "haha...coconuts" was not particularly coherant, but still. Not that you needed to know all that, though. Anyways.
pretty good, although it would be nice to know a little bit more about who the characters are.
Author's Response: Thanks! Yeah, the next chapter will be the standard "three weeks before" type thing, and I'm planning on character development.
You have got to update! Soon! Please!
Author's Response: Okay...first I have to write the next chapter, haha. *furiously types away*
Ouch! Poor Lizzie! Well written with her being fantastically brave and strong for those around her even though they aren't her team.
Author's Response: Oh, you know John will rescue her because otherwise...it would be sad. Or will he? Mwahahaha.
What a great start! Looking forward to the next chapter(s)!!
Author's Response: Thankee very much!