Wonderful! :)

This was such a fabulous chapter. I loved Rodney's concern for Elizabeth. Rodney and Elizabeth's relationship is so wonderful, and I'm really glad you touched on that, and I just looooved Rodney getting grossed out over John and her having sex. Hehe! I also absolutely adored John's "I want you" speech, as well as the "I want to live with you" one, including those wonderful sentences: "I like to read my book. I pick up my socks." Sooo cute. So very John as well. You are really on top of the characters in this story, which I love. But things said may not have necessarily be statements that have been said or that will ever be said, but it feels like everything said could actually be said by those people. Loved that whole scene of John and Elizabeth in their new quarters. Also really loved the infirmary scene. The ending was very sweet, but it was also really sad and good that she realized that if anything were to happen to the baby due to carelessness, it would break him, when she says, "It's okay now?". I love that both Carson and John are so concerned for her wellbeing, and for the baby's. There was some other moment I really liked, but I can't remember what it was... Can't seem to find it either. Anyway, I really loved the entire chapter, so it probably doesn't need to be pinpointed.

Awww! This is still great! I hope everything will be fine with the pregnancy. Oh and that they'll rescue Jack!