*le sigh* So I had to read this twice, cause the first time I read it, I didn't leave a responce, and it's been a couple of days...
Anyway, I reeeaally loved that talk towards the beginning as John and Elizabeth walked to find Rodney. Well, more towards the middle. Such a good talk, and it all played out perfectly. Made me very happy.
And Carson knows she's pregnant!! That's awesome. Now, they will have someone to help fly the other jumper. But I just realized, it's probably the baby who has the gene! I mean, how could it not, since John's gene is so strong, and the baby would have some of his DNA. And Elizabeth crying at the end? So sad... I can just imagine what's going through her head right now. Great work, and I cannot wait for the next chapter!
Brilliant! I love your writing style and your ideas are perfect! :)
Nice going. I also like how you had them figure that out. *squishes tearful Lizzie* don't cry...
Whoa! What a way to figure it out! Very inventive. I'm already dying to read the next installment.