Superb! you take something very common on ShepWeir fan fiction, and turn it into something wonderufl by mixing it with the return, I love it, In fact, I'm addictec to it, MORE PLEASE!
awwww!!
I love this fic, it is so damn cute!!
Author's Response: Thanks for reading!
Oh, nice! Next chapter soon, OK?
Author's Response: it went out for betaing this morning. ;)
AWWWW!!!! I'm so in love with this fic. So glad you finally posted, too! Phew. What a good wait. So glad about the outcome. It totally makes sense that she is feeling a bit weak in the stomach, since she diiiid lose a ton of blood, but even more nauseous along with the aching chest? Hmm... *wiggles eyebrows*
I REALLY loved how you didn't have John reach out and hug Elizabeth when she was telling him about Simon, because even though he was feeling awkward, there is this sense that John wouldn't know how to portray his emotions that way. Great job staying true to the characters!! And Elizabeth was so wonderful throughout, and so was John. Also loved his not-deserving comment. Fabulous, fabulous. And the last paragraph? Excellent ending. You have me so incredibly hooked.
Author's Response: I was a huge fan of Elizabeth before I started writing. Working on this just made me fall in love with John. I'm glad you like it. :)
So glad I am across this. Very good.
Author's Response: Thanks! I hope you like the archive.
*smirks*
Author's Response: *giggles* thanks!
Awww! Cute!
I think I know why ELizabeth is feeling sick! hehe!
Author's Response: *smirks*