Great job. keep up the good work.
Author's Response: *crosses fingers* will try.
Loved the chapter! Great excitement, and even though Elizabeth was hurt, I loved how John was right there for her. And that kiss! :) Can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response: It only seemed fair that Elizabeth would get something good after that. Thanks again. :)
Ohmigoodness! You did a fantastic job with that shrapnel scene...it was hard for me to read! I usually can read that kind of stuff, but I understood the pain she was going through, and it ended up being hard to read because of the pain she was going through. Fantastic work, seriously! Very, very good. This was such an awesome chapter. PLEASE post the next one as soon as you can! Rating is definitely a 10, no doubt. :D
Author's Response: It was definitely one of the hardest things I've had to write. I was absolutely enamored with John when I was done.
Yeah! I was so pleased to see another chapter - You can't update fast enough :)
There are so many things that I love about this fic that I don't know where to begin, so to save you sitting through my waffling, all I will say is great fic and please update soon!
Author's Response: Thanks much. I'm really quite stunned how well this has been recieved. *blushes*
awwwwwww
i love this fic!!!! the idea of having carson operate on her leg was really good
Author's Response: I thought it was time to turn the tables on John a bit.