Wow! Probably the best Sheppard/Weir fan fic I have ever read.! Great job!
Wow! What a brilliant story. I laughed, cried, almost had an anxiety attack, and sighed in blissful joy at the end.
I found this story when I was looking for podfic and stumbled across the first three parts podficed, I almost didn't go and read it because I have some eye trouble and long fics can be a pain, hence looking for podfic. But I am so glad I did start reading because it's totally worth the sore eyes and headache I now have.
One of the best fics I have ever read. Thank you so much!
Know this review is ages since you wrote this but only found this site by chance. Had to let you know how impressed I was. Read the whole thing in three days -glad I didn't have to wait for updates! Your story blew me away! (Some minor grammar and story line errors but nothing that detracted from the overalll story). I was amazed how you just nailed all the characters! Loved the mix of atlantis and sg1 and thought your portrayal of Jack was brill. Shep and weir absolutely awesome -loved them both. Creative brilliance!
I'm eagerly awaiting more... you have me worrying about everyone, poor freaked out Liz, and Teyla... are we ever going to be able to get her back? I'm also being throughly entertained by just the idea of Carson's "Mission" keep going, I'll keep reading!
Author's Response: Thanks! It'll work out in the end (I hope...) :)
I so much enjoy this story. Can't wait for Liz to have the baby.
Author's Response: Thanks! That should be intersting.
Hi. I read all chapters this week and Iīm so in it now. It is just like a drug, I couldnīt stop to read. You have a wonderful narrative style, your charakters act and speak IC and you wrote a complete new season. A season I would love to watch. I just can fancy John as a growing father like you descripe him. So affectionately, caring and Dutiful. I love the small scenes where Elisabeth and John are alone. You let them handle so openly with each other, itīs is like sugar for my soul. I would love to read more of this scenes. Oh and it is amazing that the whole SG1 Team has survived and is now in Atlantis too. And the wedding between Jack and Sam *squeee* FINALLY *gg* Oh... but I do hope Teyla and Carson can escape from Michael. They all have enough problems and enemys, they donīt need Michael on their list too. Iīm very curious if they really want to give the wraith the dates about earth and the milky way galaxi. Because that would not be fair. There are more occupied planets in the milky-way galaxi and they need the protegtion from Atlantis just as well as Earth did it. What you write is not only a love-story. I admit my first reason to read was the baby-thing. It is just my kink *sorry* But I read on because of the fact that you write really thrilling. Permantly happens things I did not expect. Like blowing away Earth...tststs...
Okay, I end here, because I want you to write the next chapter and not read my Review *gg*
Yours, Indi :-)
Hurry update please. Loved it. You are talented.
Author's Response: Thanks much! The next chapter is over with my beta, so it should be up soon.
hi x thought your story was great! loved the whole lot my fave moment was jack slapping john! excellent x shepp and weir forever! woohoo
Author's Response: Thanks. I really like the Jack/John dynamic.
Yep, I write. Just in italian, because, as you could see, I don't write very well in your language. And I got my reviews too. So I know how could be good and useful getting a review, believe me. I was just saying that someone could have another way of show how he/she love the feedbacks. That's all. I'm sorry if I overstepped (can I use this word?) my role of just reader... it has made with the better intentions, it wasn't a review against you. Sharing opinions for better understand each other. Sorry again.
Author's Response: Your english is certainly better than my italian. ;)
Wonderful. This is the best long story (and one af the best ever) that I ever had the pleasure to read. And I read a lot. Just wonderful. You really should think of write a your own story. You'll do great. Please, update as soon as possible!
I really like this story. I think you are doing really great in getting the characters' voices. One thing though, you have John switching Lizzie's coffee for water when everyone knows she's pregnant but she still has it after... you might want to correct that..
great job!
Author's Response: fixed.
Thanks!
awwww how nice....can you write more? Like if they remember anything else. I have to admit I'm enjoying the awkward tension between them...
but anyhow, very nice! I enjoyed very much!
Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you like it. Part two is ove with my beta, so as soon as she finishes it should be up.