Your story touched my heart. Love the way you create their relationship. Totally in character.
Very realistic, so in character as I perceived them during the series, no words between them is necessary, loved this story so much!
Awww, that was so good and at the same time so sad. I can only hope that when you continue this that Liz says something to John. It's obvious she has to be the one to say something first since he's just respecting her boundaries. John really is a sweetheart! =)
I love it!! You did it perfectly!
aww! That is just so cute and sad at the same time! I love the idea to that story and how you worked everything out! Just the right amount of romance and angst combined. Smashing!
Very good. One of the best Atlantis fanfic I have ever read.
Ce n'est pas trop guimauve , c'est réaliste. Vraiment très bien.
( sorry for my poor English...)
beautifully done! I love the detail of thought into Elizabeth... I also love how great this story is and its without dialog!
awww.. that was so nice but sad.
oh, so sad at the end!