Reviews For Breakdown
Reviewer: shepweir always Signed Date: October 26, 2009 - 03:21 pm Title: Breakdown

That breakdown scene was so powerful and authenic to Elizabeth
and John.

Reviewer: atlantis child Signed Date: September 14, 2006 - 04:04 am Title: Breakdown

awwww....that's such a good breakdown scene...i'm surprised we haven't seen a good 'buckle from stress scene' especially after "Common Ground"! Nicely done! You know you could just probe through the list of beta-readers... I'd volunteer, but I may be a bit slow to harass because of school and work ;)

Reviewer: Keladry Signed Date: September 02, 2006 - 06:11 pm Title: Breakdown

very nice! Liked it a lot!

Reviewer: atlantisfan Signed Date: September 02, 2006 - 12:39 pm Title: Breakdown

If you want me to I'm good at harrassing people and being generally annoying, just ask the people on my LJ!! I can help you out if I haven't got too much on my plate over the next few weeks

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