Reviews For Breakdown
Reviewer: shepweir always Signed
Date: October 26, 2009 - 03:21 pm
Title: Breakdown
That breakdown scene was so powerful and authenic to Elizabeth
and John.
Reviewer: atlantis child Signed
Date: September 14, 2006 - 04:04 am
Title: Breakdown
awwww....that's such a good breakdown scene...i'm surprised we haven't seen a good 'buckle from stress scene' especially after "Common Ground"! Nicely done! You know you could just probe through the list of beta-readers... I'd volunteer, but I may be a bit slow to harass because of school and work ;)
Reviewer: Keladry Signed
Date: September 02, 2006 - 06:11 pm
Title: Breakdown
very nice! Liked it a lot!
Reviewer: atlantisfan Signed
Date: September 02, 2006 - 12:39 pm
Title: Breakdown
If you want me to I'm good at harrassing people and being generally annoying, just ask the people on my LJ!! I can help you out if I haven't got too much on my plate over the next few weeks