Very good! I ALWAYS thought such kind of scene was missing from the episode.
Good thing you wrote it for us shippers :)
beautiful... it's a shame a scene like this wasn't in the episode.
I love this!!!! Great tie-in to the episode!! You really did it really well, and I love how it was done subtley and not unrealistically...
Very nice. I thought it was perfect. Descriptions were right on. I really loved it. Wonderful job.