Love this story! I'm glad Caldwell didn't get away with that. But you never told us how much prison time he got.
Very well done. I loved how their relationship grew when he stood by her. That is so John the HERO. I was surprised he never hit Caldwell. I know he was extremely tempted.
sorry i didnt review for each chapter, but ive been reading it chapter after chapter, and i was too involved in the story to take a break:D. well its past 2am and i can say this is well-spent time. i totally loved the fic, it was great.sad ... but brilliant. love it how john's always there. would i be pushing it if i asked for another chapter? some kind of epilogue, shep might even propose to her after some time, a couple of months. *grin*. i'm saying it again, this is great! loved it:d. the monopoly thing and the pie were really sweet:D.
Don't worry, I knew it wasn't you. You can write, for one thing.
awwww....everyone made it back. I love this as a way to end it. It shows she's happy and it's going to be okay.
Would have liked another kiss though!
great chapter, characters are spot on. :)
Beautiful. I love how it was Kate that caught them. Thankyou for this chapter. :)
Thankyou for bringing up the whole review thing, I totally appreciate why you might feel that.
Author's Response: wow! you are fast! LOL!!! thanks for the review and the interest! I'm slowly, but surely making my way through this story! I just thought that Kate had been too quiet and it was just too wrong to have the chapter have too perfect of a scene :) thanks again!
So cute. Fluffiness. *sigh* Another great chapter!
Oh I saw this story on FanFiction. I loved it. in my favourites list right now! :)
Author's Response: hehehe ty! ff.net doesn't usually cooperate when i put up chapters!!! LOL so glad you've been enjoying it!
I just love the bit about pie. :) Good to see Elizabeth getting to go home, finally. I am curious to see what is left for them.
I vote for the Ronan squashing. That's my favorite sentence. Nicely done. I especially like that you didn't make us wait. ;)
Glad to see another chapter. And glad that Caldwell didn't get away with anything. Looking forward to the next chapter!
OOoh, knew John was gonna be in question! Great job...love to see more, if you could fit it in!
Love the new chapter, update soon!
Author's Response: LOL!!!! I was trying to focus on some 'court' stuff, since I know people had wanted to see some of that... But there shall be some more John/Elizabeth-ness!!!! EHEHEHHEHEHE
brill! go elizabeth! please post more really soon! :)
Author's Response: thanks for the response! i'm glad you enjoyed the chapter!
YAY! Great way to tie in the title, I was wondering where it came from! So the trial continues next, please update soon!
Ooooh, the trial is coming up! Can't wait! Nice chapter here, loved the part about fear.
Court scene up next? I've been looking for someone else to write one as I have just written one for my fic and I'd like to see how someone else does it. Good luck with carrying on.
Author's Response: Since these chapters are only 2-3 pages at time...things move slightly slower...plus, they need to wait for the Daedalus to show up. ;) but we'll get there...
Telya's is a great person, liked that you brought her in.
John's so perfect.
Love it, please update soon!
I love how he wants to protect her like that, it's so sweet. In some ways I want him to beat Caldwell up - any chance?
He finally knows! John reacted perfectly *claps*
I'm almost excited about this trip to Earth. Will it be in the next chapter?
Great job, here. I can't wait for more.
Author's Response: hehehehe i'm not sure what will happen in the next chapter just yet! I've been on an Atlantis high, so I've been attempting to appease it, so we'll see ;)
awww... how good is john. they are so cute, love this story, update soon k?! :)
They're talking again! John's being so perfect.
Can't wait for more! Soon please!
OMG!!! It was Caldwell!!!!!! I had been wondering who it was and I honestly didn't think he'd have the nerve!!
I knew it! It had to be Caldwell.
Definitely doesn't make me feel any better, though.
John will go with Elizabeth, right? He has to be there for her.
Ooooh, I wonder what will happen when he finds out who did it.
Author's Response: thanks for the interest and...excitement with my story! i shall update (hopefully) within a week...i usually try to bounce between Lost, Mistakes of the Past, and Which You Think You Cannot Do in a order... ;)
i wouldnt put it past him ;)