the story's really good but i think that elizabeth is spelt with a 'z' not and 's' but aside from that the story rocks. I luv the concept of it. and i don;t understand why anyone could find Simon attractive. When he played Narim on SG-1 i thought he was ugly and didn't understand Sam's attraction to him and then on atlantis i never understood Liz's attraction to him. So the story rocks. good job.
Hm. Not a bad story but I don't think John would tell her she'd never see him again if it happened again, not with all his flirting with every female in the galaxy and the possibilities of alien drugs and such.
That was awesome i loved it, and yeh Simon didn't stand a chance. I hope you'll be adding more soon, would love to read more.
Author's Response: I'm working on it.
loved the story! simon didnt stand a chance! keep writing!
Author's Response: Of course he didn't!
And thank you, I'll definetely keep writing.