I THINK THIS IS ONE OF THE BEST ELIZABETH AND JOHN STORIES I HAVE EVER READ. EXCELLENT WORK
This story is really cool! But what happened to poor carrie?
really cool idea! i like there being the tension and Elizabeth being all pissy about the girlfriend! awesome chapter!
yeah i really love this story, keep it up
This first chapter is really interesting!! I was a little confused byt the blonde 'cos I thought it was Elizabeth at the beginning but you're right, it just makes things more interesting! Now, I can't wait to read the next chapter so I do hope you'll update soon!
Wonderful story! I loved the bit where Carson asks wether Elizabeth had knocked him out! Please update soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Okay, so much love for this one! You're right, as much as I hate the blonde and all the issues between Elizabeth, John, and their kids, it's so much more interesting to see how the heck he plans to fix things! Very much looking forward to seeing where this leads. Hope to read more soon :)
