this storys really good, you should update soon i love it!
Author's Response: Unfortunately my PDA died and I lost all the data that I had on this story... I really hate re-writing things, so it is more than likely that this story won't get continued :( If you have any ideas for what to do with it, email me and you can take over the story if you like. ^-^
good storie but whats with the guy in the dark cloak?
another great chapter! the thought of john and rodney growing up together made me laugh! :) you must continue!
This is a great beginning. I wonder what will happen now. And I hope you'll post the next chapter soon!
Author's Response: I am happy to tell you that the next chapter is up! Thank you for the kind review, it was much appreciated.