Even though you state it as unfinished I want to tell you if you stop here would be okay it is a well presented story which is so real in many ways I truly enjoyed it I am going to have faith in John I know SPARKY will be happy.
I really like your story :)
Pleas update soon...
I can't wait for more to see where the story leads. :) It's great so far.
That Seems Like A Good Story, Hope To Hear Of More Chapter Soon. ;)