This was excellent and well written.
I really enjoyed it. The characters were believable and interesting.
This is a great story! But I must have missed something:what happened to Bethan? Did she stay on the planet & die?
Author's Response: She was ascended and just sort of vanished - so I guess she went back to her ascended-ness :D
I hope they hurry up & cure everyone of the plague. This is a great story!
very nice!!! love it =)
Author's Response: thanks
You sure know how to keep things exciting... the gate down?! I hope Someone has a brilliant idea on how to get supplies through
Author's Response: yeah - ME :)
Great story! I hope that plague isn't still there.
Brilliant story, can't wait to see what happens next
i absaloutely love it!!
please please write more.
Author's Response: No worries, I promise this story has an ending :)
great start. when will we get the rest of the story? I can't wait. Love how you have set up the plot and made a distinct characterizations of john and elizabeth in the now and in her dreams/her past life.
Very interesting start, it defintely has me intrigued. I hope that you will be updating this soon. Looking forward to reading much more.