For a first you are a natural
Great Job and your ending was
definately superior to the original.
Keep writing . I'll be looking forward
to future stories.
I would have also like a closure in that episode. Meaning John coming back to Atlantis and being "reunited" with Elizabeth. It was very annoying, that the episode ended where it ended, because it lacked of a, somewhat, closure. If only by a balcony scene between John and Elizabeth, in whatever manner they (the writers), could have played it out. By a hug or just plain talking between J&E.
I'm a tad displeased with the writers in regards to the ending.
But nevertheless... *Story goes to faves*
Author's Response: Yeah, I was too, that episode was just asking for a balcony ending. Irresistable!
I really liked it and its just how I imagine then to be in the time afterwards. Well done . Keep writing.
Author's Response: Thanks, doing your first fanfic is always really scary!