Reviewer: shepweir always Signed Date: March 19, 2010 - 02:17 pm Title: Chapter 1

I had to read this again. It breaks my heart every time. Well done and so
in character.

Reviewer: shepweir always Signed Date: October 20, 2009 - 04:18 am Title: Chapter 1

Tears. I can just feel John's despair.
He needs his Elizabeth to feel whole. Without her he is only partly there. Depresses me to see him never smile.

Reviewer: From the Stars Signed Date: July 20, 2009 - 08:17 am Title: Chapter 1

Aww, that almost had me crying there. I could somehow just see Lorne going out with someone called Mel and Rodney and Ronon's wishes made me laugh! You've got the charcters perfectly. Poor John, its nice seeing some emotion from him though. Good job!

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