This must be one of my fav fics... awesome job!! Especially with the way things between them slowly change into more.
What can I say except PERFECT. I felt all their passion and finally their deep love for each other. Outstanding and extremely romantic. HOT HOT HOT
Awww! The last one was by far my favourite, made my day. =) *salute*
Awww, I like the last one best.