Strange story line. But, I 'm intrigued.
Sad you never finished it.
I like this idea, I really loved Ronon just walking in and shooting them all. Looking forward to more!
That was intense. Lizzie seems very... Un-Elizabeth. Not sure if I like it or not. Update again and maybe I'll be able to figure that one out for myself.
this story is cool! i hope you update it soon! =)