more more ! :)
Author's Response: Soon!
Poor Elizabeth...so uncomfortable...I could absolutely see this happening on the show.
Author's Response: Yes, poor Lizzy indeed!
Simon is an idiot :-)
Author's Response: And don't we all know it!
It's really nice that she didn't pry into what happened to his marriage...he'll tell her when he's ready! The ending of this chapter is really sweet!
Author's Response: thanks!
I love how wonderful John was with the baby!
Author's Response: Hehe. Yes, John and baby. Cute idea, I thought.
Ah the sweetens!!! Hand holding! *hugs you* More please!
Author's Response: Haha. Well, this is as close as they get for now!
Ohh, I sure love these little ficlets! They are all so cute in their own way and I really hope there's still lots more to come. :)
Author's Response: There will be. Eventually!
Cute chapter!
Author's Response: Thanks!
*groans*
You're gonna kill me. First you hint her fears, then you launch that incredibly ingenious question, about does he miss being married, and then - zip! Still nothing! When do they get to kiss??
(hugs)
I love this. Now I must continue TSM, only to torture you in return.
Author's Response: Oh! I love that story!
I'm glad I'm making you crazy. Sort of!
More!! Real kiss! Real kiss you hear me?
I love this. It seems so much more like him to be the silent type. :D
Author's Response: Why yes it does. I just see him as a loner.
Ah ..! More ! Is it just going to be UST?
Author's Response: Hmm. I guess I'm writing this with Letters in mind. As in this is before then. But then again, I may change my mind.
They need to have one. Baby I mean.
Oh my God this was so cute!! I can imagine John being a perfect babysitter (or dad!) and Elizabeth's initial uneasiness with the child is pretty much in character IMO. But then, John would talk her into attaching herself to baby very easily (Isn't he a big kid after all?)
Again, this was amazingly cute and I squeed all the time, and here is a hug - - > ((HUG)) for writing this! Made me melt.
Author's Response: You're too cute. Thanks!
Oh how I love this. I so want more of it my dear.
Protective and caring John is the best I think and there is so much gentleness about him when he is like that, especially towards Elizabeth. Please write more soon!
Author's Response: Thanks.
The six chapters you've written so far have been tender and sweet and I enjoyed reading them. ^^ You're quite good at showing the subtlety of their relationship while making their feelings more than obvious. Keep up the good work.
I like to watch them disagree and argue, but somehow John always backs up a little. I find it sweet, and you captured it very good. Plus, he was defending her honor. Again. *sigh*
More please!
Oh, and I loved the way you ended "Letters". Left you a comment there too. Keep writing! You do it wonderfully!
"I kind of like you the way you are," she muttered, just loud enough for him to hear.
John smiled at her. "You know what? I think that bedside manner of yours is really coming along well..."
Love it!
Author's Response: Thanks.
More! More please!! :D I love these moments!
Author's Response: There'll be more... eventually. I'm waiting for more of yours! Letters is finished, by the way.
LOL! You made my evening hon!! This is brilliant. Serves him right!
Author's Response: Thanks!
*giggles*
Very cute!
Author's Response: Thanks!
Oh, god, this is turning out to be hilariously funny! I can't wait for the next chapter.
Author's Response: It may not be so funny.. possibly angsty.
This is really great so far..I love their bantering back and forth...can't wait for more!
Author's Response: Thanks. I know what I'm doing for chapter four, it's just a matter of getting around to it!
Okay, I am speachless!!! I love this:
"You're such a feminist, John Sheppard," Elizabeth smirked.
"Only since I met you," he confessed.
That totally got me. I can see her say that and the look on his face afterwards. i love it. More please!!!
Author's Response: I love you! You're the world's best reviewer. The third one is up.
This warmed me inside. I love it, you have the way of creating these sweet and warm scenes so well. I can imagine this happening and I love the comment about him being impossible when Elizabeth is off - world. It brings something more into this piece.
More please, I'd really love to read more!!
Author's Response: Thank you. There will be more. Probably sooner rather than later!