Yay! My favorite story is back!
Ummm, more kissing? I just love sparky kissing!!
This was amazing!! Truly amazing!
*ads with favs*
Tipsy Elizabeth is really cute!
So is protective John!
Favorite line =~"I'm drunk," she finally admitted, leaning towards him, "I lied."~ because it cracked me up.
Author's Response: Well, I aim to amuse!
I love.
Seriously been missing fiction that deal with the slowness of their relationship in a sweet way.
Please write more.
Author's Response: Thanks. I've been on a bit of a break from this recently. TPTB are trying to kill my love for Sparky!
That was a fantastic chapter! Can't wait for more!!
Author's Response: Thanks!
Elizabeth drunk and doing yoga, for some reason that really made me laugh. I can't wait for Elizabeth's reaction to this!
Author's Response: Well, I try to amuse. Sometimes.
*flails*
*flails some more*
*diez*
Perfect!!!! OMG this is perfect!!!! Oh I have to repay this! Soon! And I wonder what happens next - this was so adorable!
Author's Response: I thought you might like what happened here.
I'm going to hope that you update your story soon. Or else!
yay more story... i absolutely love every one of these...they are sooo cute
Author's Response: Thanks!
Adorable, loved how John responded to Elizabeth in his drugged up, incoherent state.
Author's Response: thanks
Talk about torturing me on purpose. This was the best chapter yet, i love how you build this up! Kiss! I want a kiss!!!
Author's Response: Soon. Patience...
*squeee* I like whiny John asking for Elizabeth.
Author's Response: He is kind of whiny!
Sparky cuteness *squee* ...I can't stop aw-ing, lol.
Author's Response: Thanks! More coming soon.
This chapter was hilarious! I'm glad I'm sitting on my bed rather than the chair, I might have fallen off laughing :-)
Author's Response: Ha. Nice to know it was amusing!
Oh goddamnit make them kiss properly!! You're making me crazy here!!!
Author's Response: It's fun making you crazy. And you need to finish TSM. Maybe if you do that.....
This was so cute and John's line about them having a field day with this was great, very him.
Author's Response: Thanks!
Sooooo sweet! I'm always jumping in my seat when I see there's a new update to this! Please keep this collection going, you write them so well!
Author's Response: Thanks. I think there are plenty of others who write them better than me, but they are just too cute not to want to write about them.
I love this story. Can't wait for an update.
Author's Response: thanks
"You heard me," the scientist muttered, "You're one step away from giving her your dog tags and asking her to 'go steady'. Pathetic."
Oh Rodney...that was hilarious!
Yay!!! An update! And what a lovely one! Just as I imagine it always - Rodney would behave like a kid watching his parents kiss and going "Eeewww, stop it!"
Write more, please!
Awwww, I love this!
Author's Response: Thanks. It's a little unusual...
still readin it, and still lovin it !
Author's Response: thanks
Of course brothers wouldn't like him...I love how close they are in this chapter..nicely done! Can't wait for more!
Author's Response: Thanks!
John and shopping..great combination!
That last sentance... and the imagery.... is simply.... aaaaawwwww! And he kissed her! On top of her head, but he kissed her! I'm almost perfectly happy!
Make him kiss her for real!
Author's Response: You make me laugh! I'm glad you liked the last sentence. It took me a while to figure out where I was going with that.
Gosh I hate you and love you for this!
Kiss? Please? You're going to kill me with UST. AAARGH!!!!
Author's Response: You're so funny. Maybe soon..