Reviews For Snowfall
Reviewer: solemn_eyed Signed Date: July 15, 2007 - 07:24 am Title: Chapter 1

Very good! Although it's kind of the wrong wheather for this at the moment, I really got a wintery feeling :) And the snow metaphor is really awesome.

Author's Response: The wrong weather indeed... I was sitting here in front of my desk fan and drinking cold drinks while writing about snow. Glad it worked for you, though. Thank you for reading and reviewing.

Reviewer: fex Signed Date: July 14, 2007 - 09:55 pm Title: Chapter 1

Wow. That has to have a sequel, my dear!!
Really it was beautiful. You got the characters perfectly right. I loved the change between talks, thoughts and the metaphorical use of the snow. Perfect. Please, add a second chapter.

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you liked the way I got the snow in there. We'll see about the second chapter... life is keeping me busy at the moment. But I am planning on adding more to that universe eventually.

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