Brilliant! I love your writing style and your ideas are perfect! :)
Nice going. I also like how you had them figure that out. *squishes tearful Lizzie* don't cry...
Whoa! What a way to figure it out! Very inventive. I'm already dying to read the next installment.
Ohmigod!! Soooo hot! That was seriously smoking at the end. I loved every bit. Pleeeease post more soon! (And more smut too! That was hooot!)
This is hot!
And I wonder when they'll figure out what was happening to Elizabeth!
*sigh* good chapter, really, really nice. :)
Hehehe. Can't WAIT to be able to picture his face when he finds out she's expecting...
Superb! you take something very common on ShepWeir fan fiction, and turn it into something wonderufl by mixing it with the return, I love it, In fact, I'm addictec to it, MORE PLEASE!
awwww!!
I love this fic, it is so damn cute!!
Author's Response: Thanks for reading!
Oh, nice! Next chapter soon, OK?
Author's Response: it went out for betaing this morning. ;)
AWWWW!!!! I'm so in love with this fic. So glad you finally posted, too! Phew. What a good wait. So glad about the outcome. It totally makes sense that she is feeling a bit weak in the stomach, since she diiiid lose a ton of blood, but even more nauseous along with the aching chest? Hmm... *wiggles eyebrows*
I REALLY loved how you didn't have John reach out and hug Elizabeth when she was telling him about Simon, because even though he was feeling awkward, there is this sense that John wouldn't know how to portray his emotions that way. Great job staying true to the characters!! And Elizabeth was so wonderful throughout, and so was John. Also loved his not-deserving comment. Fabulous, fabulous. And the last paragraph? Excellent ending. You have me so incredibly hooked.
Author's Response: I was a huge fan of Elizabeth before I started writing. Working on this just made me fall in love with John. I'm glad you like it. :)
So glad I am across this. Very good.
Author's Response: Thanks! I hope you like the archive.
*smirks*
Author's Response: *giggles* thanks!
Awww! Cute!
I think I know why ELizabeth is feeling sick! hehe!
Author's Response: *smirks*
Great job. keep up the good work.
Author's Response: *crosses fingers* will try.
Loved the chapter! Great excitement, and even though Elizabeth was hurt, I loved how John was right there for her. And that kiss! :) Can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response: It only seemed fair that Elizabeth would get something good after that. Thanks again. :)
Ohmigoodness! You did a fantastic job with that shrapnel scene...it was hard for me to read! I usually can read that kind of stuff, but I understood the pain she was going through, and it ended up being hard to read because of the pain she was going through. Fantastic work, seriously! Very, very good. This was such an awesome chapter. PLEASE post the next one as soon as you can! Rating is definitely a 10, no doubt. :D
Author's Response: It was definitely one of the hardest things I've had to write. I was absolutely enamored with John when I was done.
Yeah! I was so pleased to see another chapter - You can't update fast enough :)
There are so many things that I love about this fic that I don't know where to begin, so to save you sitting through my waffling, all I will say is great fic and please update soon!
Author's Response: Thanks much. I'm really quite stunned how well this has been recieved. *blushes*
awwwwwww
i love this fic!!!! the idea of having carson operate on her leg was really good
Author's Response: I thought it was time to turn the tables on John a bit.
Yay more Princess Bride references!! :D And come on, stop teasing. ;)
Author's Response: Teasing? *looks innocent* I don't know what you're talking about...
Interesting! I think I have an idea about Elizabeth's illness. :) but of course I'll wait to see what you're going to do with this. Post again soon!
Author's Response: They'll figure it out soon.
Fabulous! Ahh, I'm dying for more!
Author's Response: There's a lot a I have to cover in this story, so there will definitely be a lot coming.
Awww! That's great!!
And it's Doctor Lam, not Doctor Lamb...
Author's Response: Thanks! (for the correction as well)
more?!
Author's Response: ^__^